Poetry: Winter Show
The snow is tumbling
tumbling down
descending humbly
upon the ground
frozen dandelions
herald the day
purloin my thoughts
along the way
silent soldiers
marching on
proclaim the coming
of the dawn
they dash and
dance and flit
and flow
a serene scene
this winter show.
A lovely winter scene.
Thanks very much for your kind comment!
Amazing imagery. Beautiful words.
Thanks so much!
Thanks a bunch!
Simply Beautiful. Reminds me of my childhood days in New England.
Beautiful
Thanks maria!
Ah, I grew up in minnesota and lost all appreciation for the snow. This brings it back some 🙂
I’m glad😀
Awesome flow. The words float like flakes!
Thanks very much mark!
Lovely words that summon up a beautiful vision of winter.
Thanks very much!
You are most welcome. We don’t see much snow down in the sub-tropics. 🌴
I bet lok
This painted the most tranquil and serene picture in my mind while I’m grumpily slaving away at work. By grumpily slaving away at work, I mean eschewing work to read poetry 😉 Thank you for this!
You are so very welcome, I’m glad you could eschew it lmao
Beautiful poem!❄
Thanks so much!
A lovely poem Rob, you write wonderfully, tackling each moment of the snow fall wonderfully.
Thanks so much that means a lot to me!
My pleasure Rob.
Great poem! ❄❄❄😮
Thank you!
Wow, beautiful poem. I love it!
Thank you!
Silent soldiers … I like that
Beautiful. We had out first snow overnight where I live.
Thank you! It’s been a super mild winter so far. Just the way I like it
Well… it’s easier on the utility bills. But I actually like the cold and snow! At least for a little while 😊
It’s a scene unfolding before my eyes. Your a great storyteller and a poet. Each word is a poem in itself.
Thanks so much Yasmine I don’t know about all that lol
Wow! That’s excellent and I love the pic 🙂
Thanks very much, I appreciate your kindness
It’s been years since I’ve seen snow. Maybe I need to migrate up to where you are…
Do it yesterday…
😛