Poetry: White Heat

sultry siren soft whispers this night
sweetly singing her hypnotic score-
echoes keep my heart from fright
logic dispelled and so much more.
goddess of my dreams drifting near
a melodic chant swirls soothing me-
swift this embrace makes it clear
love that’s divine in her eyes I see.
creature of loving brings me where
thoughtful reposes drift in dreams-
sighing gently a mesmerizing stare
her touch hot thunder so it seems.
breathing her rapturous flowers in
soft gently caressing her body bare-
ease into a trance dance hot within
love’s opiate mist filling the air.
fervent touches soft passionate sigh
thunderous like waves often can be-
under the gaze of the moon so high
a song so sweet, this joyful revelry.
crimson loins delirious white heat
bodies embracing anxiously meet-
hot opiates deed hypnotizes again
sublimely serene subsides so then.
we never again suffer a lonely day
replete in this dream we shall stay-
to love eternal until cosmic dust
within together ever stay we must.
beautiful 🙂
ThInk you so much!
This is incredible. Your poetry has gotten so much more evocative. Everything lately has been so provoking for me. I’m greatly indebted to you.
Oh you are too sweet, thank you so much!
hot!!!
Thank you!
lol at “overactive imagination” Who cares, it produced that and that was beautiful.
thank you so very much!
Your descriptiveness and imagery are amazing – great work!
Overactive imagination lol
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lmao…and it is a lovely one. I wrote two very scorching kinda xxx rated pieces I am a little hesitant to post. Should I just say fug it, and post them anyway? They are a bit more racy than my usual pieces. And I don’t usually hold back, so that’s how hesitant I am.
I enjoy your scorching pieces, Mine are a lot tamer but switching it up is always a good change – but your blog, your rules!
Yeah, no, this is more than scorching…might be outright porn, omg lol. I’ll debate it today. Thanks.
Let me know if you do post lol, love to check it out 🙂
I probaby will. What the hell, you only love once
Yes! I look forward to reading it when you post 😊
We shall see after you read them lol
Live
I think you could write a screenplay for a movie. You write very evocatively. Your dream unfolds before the eyes of the reader. Divinely creative.
Thank you Yasmine. I’m afraid I’m not much of that kind of writer lol. You are always so kind and loving, makes me feel very special
You are welcome Robbie.
Wow, Rob. So beautiful. I love this!
Thanks a lot Victoria, I was wondering what you would think
Wow. Your dreams are so much better than mine.
Ha, wish it was real lol
I think there is a saying that goes … You must dream it to achieve it.
Now I need a willing victim lmao
Beautiful, Rob.
I’m so glad you like it Angela. Angela is the name of the first girl I ever missed. I wrote about her in let’s talk about kidding lol
Awww!