Poetry: Under The Sky
Lie with me
under the stars
on the grass
behind the willows.
Whisper to me
tell me whys
share your truth
bare your soul.
Come to me
raw with need
hot with desire
expose your yearning.
I’ll hold you
near to me
inside of me
become your solace.
Lie with me
under the sky
on the ground
you are free.
I enjoyed this poem.
Thank you very much I am glad you enjoyed it
this must be the most tender piece of your writing I have read, offering solace, that’s the epitome of sacrifice to me, to offer comfort when you are hurting, to soothe and solace when you are crying inside. Forgetting self in that moment we feel another person’s body needs comfort, made me smile from inside today.
I’m so glad it did so!
Very lovely, Rob. Don’t give up the hope of finding ‘perfect’ love. Perfect for you anyway!
Thanks Meg!
That sounds very peaceful. To live in that poem, life would be good.
Better still, to live in the heart of the person expressing it…I dream a lot about the perfect love…probably why I’m still alone.
I am not sure what is better; wait for the perfect love and risk being alone or take any love and wonder what could have been and no be alone.
You’ll never know if it’s perfect if you don’t try.
True.
No no, it’s the same song!
I’m being very confusing, aren’t I. *sigh*
Completely lmao
oh, lol
Aww its so sweet. :3 You always write such sweet things!
Also, this reminds me of that song.
Thank you so much. What song?
If I Lay Here by Snow Patrol!
I know that song, it’s a great song! Thank you for the reminder.
Chasing Cars. -_- Damn it.
Lol
The song is called Chasing Cars, I’m just forgetful.
I don’t know that song. I’ll have to check it out.