Poetry: Topaz Thoughts
I’m drifting dreaming soaring high
floating flying beyond the sky.
To this love this wonder of mine
my heart seeps a burgundy wine.
Fragrant blend of tangerine hope
scented sweetly, so vast its scope.
The chewy stars are pasted high
fading further dark sorrows die.
Descending through this Milky Way
the cosmos within which we play.
Lovely beauty’s hair is gleaming
raven locks so shiny streaming.
Topaz thoughts, cascading under
wondrous Zeus’ mythic thunder.
White hot lava hot flowing dew
scorching me as I’m loving you
Tranquil sounds soft echoing free
cognac kisses breezing through me.
Hyacinth woman sharing your soul
your cosmic being makes me whole.
Your Cosmic being makes me whole. Awesome words and in this cosmic world that we live in they simply make us whole and complete. Superb penned lines with an awesome 👏 picture of rhythms.
Thank you so very much! You and I are cut from the same lordly fabric my friend.
Yes for sure the same One who is in each and every one.
Beautiful, Rob. Such lovely imagery.
Thank you Victoria! I appreciate you stopping by and reading my work again.
Of course! You should get used to me, lol.
Did you watch the game? Of course, right?
Oh yes, every last second of it. My first sober Super Bowl in 35 years. Was a little tough, but overall enjoyable. What did you do?
I watched too but I didn’t pay super close attn. It was a pretty awesome comeback. I’m glad you were sober for it. 😊
Part of me wanted to not be sober. But I got through it.
I’m glad you got through it.
Thanks Victoria. It wasn’t that tough, just had some moments lol. Like every score, no jello shots lmao
Ha. Yeah. It must be sometimes hard to replace those ways to celebrate with something else.
Which three poems would you like presented?
Hmm. I don’t know. I’d have to re- listen.
Beautiful and romantic, Rob! The painting is a lovely choice, too.
Thanks very much meg! I loved the painting.
You’re welcome! I’m glad to see the Muse has returned. 🙂
I have her chained in the basement. She’s been a very bad girl.
She’s not likely to be very cooperative in that condition!
Oh, she likes it that way. Chained up. I like to tease her for hours, until she gives up her gems!
Hmmmmmm
Don’t worry, I feed her and clothe her and make sure she is quite comfortable. I just can’t have her roaming all over the place. The world is a very dangerous place!!
It certainly is…
You are strangely quiet about our Super Bowl win, by the way lmao
Ha! I fully expected to hear from YOU, after that epic comeback!
Well, you just did silly woman
Silly?!? 🙁
just playing around
I know, but I can’t let that go!
What, silly woman? I’m sorry, I meant no disrespect Meg, you know me better than that. I take it back.
I’m joking back with you! Ah, it’s hard to convey that with typing… sorry, not offended in the least. Don’t worry!
Phew! You sounded so serious. Gotta put in a smiley face here or there Meg. 🙂
Sorry! 😀 😀 😀 xo
Your choice of words in the poem is quite poetic…
Thank you very much! I wanted to keep revising it, but I finally forced myself to publish lol
Gem of a poem. Can’t stop reading , don’t want it to end.
Thank you Yasmine, I love that you always love my work, no matter how good or how lousy, 🙂
Are you kidding ? It’s not lousy. You dare call your work lousy , me not speaking to you.
I didn’t say all of it was lousy, but sometimes it’s not that great. It’s ok lol
Yeah. I know. Happens to all of us. Don’t single yourself out. I hate some of my work too.
Beautiful!
Thanks Angela!
You’re welcome!
Love the poem and the painting!
Dwight
Thanks very much Dwight!
OOPS! Should have been Perhaps…
Fantastic piece. Loved the flow of this eloquent write.
Thanks a lot for your read Amitav