Poetry: Suffocate Me
Seep slowly into my core
it’s you I desperately adore
filling my soul with wonder.
Suffocate me on this night
ominous mist of dark delight
deep trance I’ve fallen under.
Slowly blind me with your lies
so surely sweet intention dies
this mind is cast asunder.
Does this truly thus portend
an aching dying sorry end?
your spell I’ve fallen under.
Thus my promise laid to waste
surely chasing illusions taste
this love casts hope asunder.
This lying love screams disdain
echoes loudly her death refrain
torments my soul with wonder.
“Illusions taste”. Love that!💜
Thank you very much. It’s a poem about smoking crack, not love. Perhaps I should have put a note on retrospect
I like that you didn’t say what it’s about. The price we pay for that taste of illusion is in the same category as love. Chasing a feeling of bliss only to be dropped down into the abyss. Thank you for sharing!
Oh good, cause I debated whether to do that. I guess I’ll leave it then. Love your blog name
It allows others to see beauty in pain. Thank you, sweet and fierce describe me very well. I may appear one way, but if others only knew what my eyes have seen, what I too have overcome. 😉
Well I will be reading about your experiences. I hope you lay it all out there, I love blood and guts writing
You and me both. 💪
I just found that out. Nice work
Thanks for the direction. I’m still figuring out WordPress. I never would have found that comment. 😉 Just another sign our brains mesh well.
My reply to your comment :
I am honestly surprised that I allowed myself to be so truthful. I guess I could have taken it way further, but to start that was enough. I’m so tired of this layer of fake shit when it comes to intimacy. (Into me you see) So I allowed myself to be seen. I look forward to your story on the subject. It’s nice to meet you !!!
So glad to meet you, and you being seen is a lovely thing I like your style
So you took the plunge and followed me, lol. You’re cute haha
Of course. 😜 Us crazies have to stick together. I don’t know many like myself. Cute and Crazy. Good enough for me. Hee hee
Indeed
I read your post about sex. My comment will be in your spam folder. I might just write my own, though it might raise a few eyebrows lol
Wow. Very sensual…with traces of shame. Wonderful to read, not so delicious to experience. ❥❧
Did you ever watch “So You Think You Can Dance?”
I’ll let you in on a secret: It’s about doing drugs, shhhh! Don’t tell anyone. And I have seen that show once or twice, why?
Haha, duly corrected. I won’t try to give my opinion again, haha!
You might enjoy this, if you haven’t seen it? 🙂 I hope you do. Your poem reminds me of it, but I’m probably wrong about this, too, haha.
https://youtu.be/dQumAKlCJUY?t=1m4s
Take care.
I wasn’t being sarcastic. I disguised it like a poem about a love, which drugs can be like. You know what I mean? Hey, I asked you to invite me to your blog. I can’t see your stuff.
I didn’t think you were being sarcastic. 🙂
I just experienced this obviously differently than you intended and you corrected my interpretation, that’s all.
Peace.
oh good, I’m glad we fixed that mess!
Mess? Look, obviously I’ve said something you’ve taken offense with. I deeply apologize. That was never my intention.
I won’t bother you again. Take care.
Whoa, I just saw this comment, i didntbmean that in a bad way I meant confusion lol. It’s not how I meant it to sound you’ve said nothing wrong.
You’re on my blog. Don’t forget to click follow so I appear in your reader.
Thanks for joining. 🙂
ok. well, you characterized our exchange as a mess….it startled me.
The link to the video doesn’t work and when I type the video name in it does not come up.
No worries. It was not important, anyway.
I found the video. Interesting
I saw the video. Nice dance to compare my poem to thank you!
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I see you changed your banner since I was here last! I popped back in to show a couple of my friends your poem, haha! 😊
Have a wonderful day!!!
Lol, ill probably change it again. Nice blog by the way
Beautiful words
Thank you so much
Your welcome
This has such a haunting quality, very much like the drug of choice
Thank you for your comment Reena! I was aiming for that
Dark and beautiful. Great job, Rob!
Thanks so much, just the feeling I wanted to convey.
I find this alluring, it could be about love, hate, actual narcotic vices… LOVE it.
thank you so much, you found the secret…
I really enjoy when someone can write in a vague manner and keep it interesting, leaving the subject matter to interpretation.
Then I think you will really like “Love’s Conundrum.” You don’t have to read it now, but I wrote this poem about the duality of love…with a twist in the last stanza. Thanks for spending some time…