Poetry: Spit Forth Guts
Oh the venom on these lips
cold fury should you
taste it there. Drink
deep my gathering gloom
quench your thirst for
my lies and my truths
and my muted thoughts.
Stand still frozen dead
in pools of wonder and
dread for this poison
that seeps into your
pores will not soon
leave the haunted spaces
your frightened places
there will be myriad traces
where it killed the
wonder it found in your
dull and dreary mind.
Choke on toxic thoughts
vomit my musings and
spit forth guts colored
black with doubt and
fear and torment stain
the ground with your
loosened purpose your
pathetic beliefs that
words are always intentions
of the noble and righteous.
This is vicious, dark and lovely-I talked to jasper about you by the way I think he’s got his hands full, don’t be afraid to email him again, maybe once the holiday is over
Thanks I’m glad you liked my poem and thanks for talking to jasper
Excellent. Quite visceral.
Thank you em!
I love this . Fav this. Must read it over again.
Thank you Yasmine, thank you always for your support
You write and we all enjoy your work. oh. I must thank you for that
You’re so cute
You are toooo!😉
Lol thanks Yasmine
You’re right– it is certainly a take-no-prisoners kind of night with your writing.
Is that a bad or good thing lol
You tell me!
I meant the poems themselves. I’m just spewing out my brain don’t even know if I like this stuff. Usually I’m more careful and structured. I dunno what the hell
Actually loved two of them. Too tired to decide if I actually understood Silent Snow– will reread after sleep.
Thank you. Silent Snow sucks, I dont know what its about or why I spent almost an hour shaping it to look like nothing lol
I don’t think it sucks! I just think it is too cryptic for my tired brain.
I don’t think it means anything more than the crappy words it’s written with lol. It’s ok, I know when my work sucks, and the snow poem sucks. I think our conversation switched poems lol. I like my guts one. It’s the snow one I do not like
Just to be clear I love Spit Forth Guts and I Bled Here. Good powerful stuff.
Thank you as always! Maybe I’ll just kill silent snow now lol