Poetry: Release This
Should passion unspent never see the day
burn madly scorching yet not feel the sun
desires yearn within cold heart there stay
hence die a slow death as they have begun.
Would such need keep silent and so fade
long languish and drift slow as a cloud
this fervor untamed in loves bed unmade
burn hot and long thus cower never proud.
Deep love unseen not given never known
veiled so shrouded bereft eternal to die
give not your soul and so change to stone
grand beauty then to Heaven I would cry
Dear angels make haste to her curse fly thee
Remove this blight and send my love to me.
Ah ! Sonnet. Love sonnets. You did great with this one. Brilliant, I think.
Thank you Yasmine, I know that you can truly appreciate the form since you are the master of many poetic forms yourself.
Your welcome Robbie. Oh ! Don’t say that, i just try to write. But you are good, eh , really awesome !
Bringing back the sonnet! Well done Rob, this is lovely
Lol, thanks. I have written a few in my day, I managed to connect my cpu tower and printed my old stuff. My old poetry is almost all rhyming. Totally different than my new stuff. That period was from 1983-2003. Then I stopped writing until I got out of jail in Oct 2016
It was good stuff man!👍👏
This is lovely☺
Thanks very much Jenn!
I love your writing skills! I may have mentioned that before 🙂
You’re a dear for saying it
How sweet! 🙂 but you earn the praise.
Beautiful, Rob. Really lovely.
Thank you Victoria, I appreciate your comment!
People don’t write sonnets anymore, but I was just feeling one
I’m glad you did and that you wrote it down. 🙂
My muse might be in town! And that’s not literal lol
That’s great! I’m supposed to be writing a poem with Meg and I have been such a slacker. 🙁
Get that pretty little ass in gear woman! Well, I guess that’s an assumption–haha, get it?
LOL! Yes, I get it. Though, my ass is a delight to behold… 😉
I could tell from your vacAtion leg shot they had to be attached to something special, so I knew it wasn’t a stretch😉
ha ha. Good deduction. 😛
I’ve walked the planet and touched a few thighs a few times
Walked the planet, huh? Well, I have had the privilege of thigh touching as well. I kinda have a thing for them…
Yup, walked the planet, you read it right
That’s a lot of walking.
Not the whole thing gosh! I meant to say I’ve walked the planet a few years and touch some thighs along the way lol
I’m sure you’ve touched a lot of thighs, lol.
Probably too many to be sure