Poetry: Love Rhyme
warm wind
humid heat
setting sun
loves meet.
colored clouds
sparkling skies
mauve moon
love sighs.
hopes heart
solemn souls
deep depths
love grows.
ragged reefs
barren beaches
smooth sands
love teaches.
bold beauty
mellow mind
witty woman
love rhyme.
Like the use of minimal words that convey much, I struggle to write like this, admire you who can, and do so beautifully, I read it a few times and each time it was like walking down a strip of land or space that we are so familiar with yet each time we go there it gives us sudden wonder, of things we missed before. I connected with the different nuances of love each more gentle but deeper that the one before. Did I say I like it? I liked it.
Thank you Gina, I love that you spend so much time really appreciating my poetry, it means a great deal to me!
its my pleasure – though I maybe manage to read like one every few days – takes a while to get the words right. its like having a book I need to pick as the mood takes me – sorry it may be very erratic for you as I leap all over your space!
I am blessed that you are gracing my space, so any corner is likely to have something popping up at you that’s for sure!
and so am I – blessed to be able to read that you offer, and i will look in those dark corners and look for the light that you hide. i sent you something this morning over at the other place we speak.
Oh, ok. I took a two hour power nap and then I had to get to work on my blog for tomorrow and now it’s dinner. I’ll catch up!
power nap sounds good! Its morning here and Monday!! Life calls and I cant say no – go blog, cook , whatever and when you are settled then come over. Lovely evening to you.
Beautiful 💛
Thank you!
lovely, Rob. 🙂
Thanks victoria
It is fun. 💖
Nice. Enjoyed this verse.
Fun.