Poetry: Brighter Sun

Subtly emerging through dawn ascends
silently advancing in cold morning mist
solemnly relieving sentinels of darkness
dour guardians retreat their duties done.
Sovereign resplendent steady she eases
an ancient inviolate purpose so timeless
the sage hot sun resolutely commanding
swiftly brightens satin gray wistful skies.
Black legion of pools swiftly imprisoned
hostages of the growing light and heat.
sentinels beset besieged by maneuvers
superior forces their capture obtained.
Bright illuminating over shadows ruling
whimsical sun seeming in her dominion
still resolutely ruling eternal the darkest
among the far hidden regardless the way.
That’s an incredible poem!
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