Poetry: Again and Again
Sensuality of you that touch
reaches me affects me much
I drift I dream a heavy sleep
lilac memories mine to keep.
Sunshine hope is burning bright
but this loving belongs to night
yearning for you from long ago
today am still wanting you so.
Snow is falling so gently outside
by logic my heart will not abide
though we parted in sorrow and pain
you torture my soul again and again.
Wonderful
Thank you so much!
I like this one too Rob, maybe it’s because I’m tired but when I saw again and again, I thought this was going to go in a different direction….lol…can’t judge a poem by it’s title 🙂
This is beautiful Rob.
Thank you for your appreciation!
My pleasure. 🙂
Such anguish. I put a wall up and tell myself I will never feel such anguish for anyone again. That is what I tell myself.
You must open you’re heart up. Love is the ultimate conundrum: joy and sorrow, pain and pleasure, angst and ecstasy. We’re it not we would simply be mammals procreating. We are the light and darkness of the Great Spirit, as a result our love will rain down and shine down brightly. In our joy lies our sorrow. That’s what makes us who we are. Just my own opinions of course
Sometimes I wish we were just mammals procreation. Would save me a lot of heartache
Are you running your business by yourself? And who is taking me out on the snowmobile?
No not by myself but that story is too complicated to take on the comment section of your blog.
Well, you know where to find me Canadian Queen
Sorry I am having a really bad day… maybe I’ll email you instead
Exactly my point I’m here for you. It’s going to be ok
sent you a mail.
Might take me a bit just got to work. It’s 9:30 there?
it’s 8.30. Have a nice day at work 🙂
Thanks. You take care now
I forgot to ask how you slept
Sleep is overrated! Went out snowmobiling all afternoon… i’m hoping the fresh air will help me sleep.
I hear you
“yearning for you from long ago today am still wanting you so.” Words Very strategically placed and Evokes emotion. Also perfectly describes my current situation. The heart has a way of grabbing memories & yearning for someone to be here in the present time. I love it
Yes it truly does. You have ancient soul to be sure
Love it! “Sunshine hope is burning bright but this loving belongs to night” that was my favorite part, I think we’ve all experienced that feeling even outside of our dreams. Just up late at night reminiscing, it’s usually bittersweet.
Precisely. You got it thAt when I wrote it and that is what was happening! So nice that picked up on that thank you for commenting and reading
No prob you always have something good to comment on lol
Thank you!
It’s such a gentle, cautious rhyme with this ethereal quality..
Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment. Did you get the comment that Robmoji sent that I edited?
I did! Replied too. :p
No, new one. I don’t see a new comment?
Huh, no. I don’t see a new one either.
But this really depends on which new one each of us is talking about. O.o
why does snow always produce such amazing poetry, this was such delicious longing, like he doesn’t want to wake up from the dream she has him in, the only way he can be with her, again and again. evocative words.
You shpuld have been a literary critic. You get my poet, amazes me. Thank you so much Gina
Love words and what words do that’s all. You are the creator of such beauty.