Poetry: A Breath
Okay fine then
you understand
then you know
what I mean
then you know
how I feel
and how
scared I am
and how
intrigued I am
and how
happy I feel
and how
funny we are
and how
deep it is
and how
too deep this
all is
and yet
how much
it is
and how
colorful it is
and how
incredible it is
and how
the hell
is this happening
to us?
you sound…..happy….this is like a boy’s first poem to a girl he likes, but hides in his book and lends it to her for her to “accidentally find”…kind of happy.
Absolutely love your comment, it’s exactly thay, one of my earliest affections ever penned it’s from 1984.
Yup….the wonder years…I liked this poem
When the heart rules the head
And how he needs to take a breath. 😊 Well done!
Exactly
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LOVE
Plain and simple
Sounds like love which is equal to despair that you can not say no to. Even though you know you probably should.
Bingo