Your Eyes


eyes on justruminating men's blogYour eyes have put me in a trance
with just one frozen picture glance
If I could hold your face and see
those lovely eyes were just for me…

Your eyes have put me in a daze
I know that love within them stays
If I could slip into their core
you’d find it’s me you would adore.

Your eyes so lovely shining bright
they reach into my soul at night
If you were here instead of there
into your eyes I’d have to stare.

Your eyes my soul they open wide
from them my feelings cannot hide
with just one frozen picture glance
your eyes have put me in a trance.

33 comments on “Your Eyes”

      1. Well it’s an old poem with no date that I found amongst my papers, this I’ve no clue having written several hundred lol. Let’s just say it’s every woman haha


    1. Ugh, NOT for Valentine’s Day–for the record. I hate the concept of Valentine’s Day on so many levels. But I do understand why you said that, and in no way am I affected by someone elses opinion of that foul holiday!

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          1. haha…healthy love is good, agreed. I’ve always loved poetry, write a little myself. Not brave enough to share it though ๐Ÿ™‚ I feel poetry is like scripture, I might not always understand it’s meaning but it’s always beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚

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            1. What?! How can you not post your poetry, come on now get posting! God’s word is great and all, but you need to share your own. I’m staying mad at you now until you inform me you have posted your poem. Don’t worry about what you think will happen, get posting! Until then๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ 

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  1. I don’t know how to say this except…I’m kind of jealous of whoever inspired this poem. I’m also jealous of your ability to make this. I don’t know why I can’t write the way I was, and it’s making me miserable. /whine

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    1. Thank you so much! I lost my poetic voice for almost a month! I found some older poetry I wrote, so I am technically still devoid of inspiration. It will come back. And to be honest, I can’t remember who inspired this poem. I know it was from a picture of someone though, long distance.

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      1. I understand what you mean. I felt I had connected with poetry and now I’m stymied. I almost feel, in a weird way, that it is the price I am paying for losing myself again. Trying to get away from that type of thinking though, because it’s making me miserable!

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          1. ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m getting there. You posted a metal song today.. you should check out Prayer by Disturbed, also Devour by Disturbed I think you’d like them ๐Ÿ™‚

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        1. Same here! I honestly can’t remember who the hell this poem was about, but I have an idea. I think it was a poet I met on my old poetry site I owned, WorldofPoets. She was from Michigan now that I think of it. I think? Lol Look forward to reading it Jeff.


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